Have some more on this newest cut.

Its the news animatic now with dialog and temp tracks of music. It has two basic Jazz types the more French "gypsy jazz guitar" and the more American "jazz drums".

Adding the dialog put a 50 sec back in to the film. So I went through one more time to cut real deep and its back to around 4 min. There is a long take that if I end up having time I will do.

And I am hoping the music will start to come together now that there is more to work with.

There are one or two or 3 parts spots in the animatic that don't read well they are jump cuts or how did he or she get over there moment that I just didn't fill in. I was more trying to get a feel for the timing and see where I could be cut down.

I could us as many pointers as you got.